writing style

1)well organization 良好的組織技巧 ( 分段 )

2)various sentence pattern 善用不同的句子語法

       A)  Inversion 倒裝

          S   MV   O,  nor   MV   S   O

        1) negative        2) inversion

e.g. The government didn’t take action, nor did the citizens give any response.

       B)  Wh noun clause

       原文: Peter  need parental care, not materical comforts.

                          ↓

         What Peter  need is not materical comforts, but parental care.

                ( subject )    (Mainverb)   (object)

                         OR

         What is needed most is not Y, but X.

         What is essential for Peter  is not Y, not X.

         What is crucial for Peter  is not Y, but X.

         What is indispensable for Peter  is not Y, but X.

             ↑以上的句子語法有助強調語氣。↑

3)Use the last sentence of a paragraph as the transitional sentence

 e.g. TS ----However , this doesn’t mean that there is no exception.(例外)

         之後在下一段寫例外的例子(Exceptional case ----Don’t repeat the words of transitional sentence !)

1) Ordinary sentence

With the co-operation of different parties, the situation can be alleviated.

2) Inversion

Only with the co-operation of different parties, can the situation be alleviated.

3) Cleft sentence

It is only with the co-operation of different parties that the situation can be alleviated.

 1) 灌輸

   infuse   

   instill            }  a concept into the minds of sb

   implant                          ↑ that SVO (appositive clause) e.g. Money is everything  ( 不可删that or 以which 代替 )

   inculcate

 2) 難以抗拒

  Driven by greed / avarice  貪心( noun )

                  greedy / avaricious ( adj ),

                                                                    many people  yield to

                                                                   succumb to

                                                                                          fall victim to       the temptation of easy plights. 

                                                                                          give way to

                                                                                           cannot resist

  3 ) 採取主動

  School should take the initiative to do something.

 4) 以身作則

  Parents should take the lead for children.

                          set up a good example for children.

 5)迴避 / 視而不見

 We shouldn't avert  ourselves from this problem.

                       ignore / connive (v) ourselves at this problem.

                       turn a blind eye to this problem.

 6 ) 方法 

  The best way / method / means / avenue / remedy

 7) 建議

  It is advisable for somebody to do something.

 8) 不再

  I no longer like this band.

 = I  don't like this band anymore .

 9 ) 後悔

  I feel regret ( noun) at / about missed opportunity.

  I regret +ving  = 後悔 (講了)

  I regret + to v  = 抱歉 ( 未講)

10)重視

  somebody     put /  lay   too much emphasis / stress    on   something                        

  =    somebody  attach too much importance  /  significance   to  something

 11) 有興趣於

  somebody 's  interest in

                  passion for                 doing ( ving~!!!)   something

                  enthusiasm for   

   →→ affection for ( 用於對人-----即「愛慕」)

 12) 珍惜機會

  You should  cherish / treasure / seize  / get hold of  / grasp  / grab  this rare opportunity

 13)  排除

  You should not  rule out

                      exclude      this possibility.

                      discard

                      get rid of 

 14) 缺乏

    verb -------    lack

   adj ----------   be lacking in

   noun --------   be in lack of

 15) 更不用說

   S    MV   O  ( negative )  , let alone  n / ving / v  ( negative )

  ( main clause )               

  e.g.  He cannot even find a job, let alone  a well- paid job.

         I  have not time for sleeping , let alone  playing.

         I cannot even walk , let alone  run.

  16) 出現

    I can turn to (尋找)  when problems crop up / arise / appear  ( 沒有passive voice~!! )

 17) 困境

  The  plight  / difficult situation / distressing situation  of somebody.

                                                                                                             ( e.g. the elderly, the old, the aged, the disabled, the handicapped )

   18) 禁止

  Woman are  not permitted

                  not allowed                     to   + verb    ( e.g. enter this room . )

                  forbidden

   Woman are  prohibited

                   stopped

                   barred                                        from   verb +ing  ( e.g. entering this room . )

                   banned

                   prevented

 19) 傳授/ 傳達

       Schools should  pass on

                         convey                          something to somebody.

                        communicate

 20 ) 起源於.....( adj ph.)

     There are many potential dangers  arising  

                                             resulting              from   the lack of sex education.

                                             stemming 

 21 ) 危險

  Illegal abortion  puts  youngsters in danger                     

                                           in jeopardy

                                           at risk

  22 ) 年

   十年           decade

   百年           centenary

   千年           millennium

  23) 說服

    prevent

   stop

   deter                          somebody  from doing  something.

   discourage

   dissuade

      ( 例外 : forbid somebody to v )

  24 ) 之前

   You  have to apply  in advance

                                     beforehand.

   You are meant ( suppose ) to finish the task  before

                                                         prior to                            his arrival  ( 後面 + noun only )

                                                         previous to

                                                        ahead of 

   待續~~!